Sunday, February 8, 2009

her eyes spoke

i looked at her eyes
i had around my head, full of butterflies,
i'm standin still before her,
Her eyes started speaking...
it goes as.........

" i made her to see this beautifull world,
i made her to feel she was beautiful,
i made her to feel pride.

you can see me,
you can enjoy me,
but make ensure your heart to be
as strong as a hard rock,
make it ensure whether it can
even bear a thunder shock!!

you had your good time
till the moment u looked me
you wandered cool and casual before this second,
but those are no more!!

you may be the lion,
but, i'm yo ringmaster.
you may as hard as an iron,
i'm yo magnet...

let the whole world come against her,
i, with my friend, smile can make it
to fall at her feet....

i communicate,
i penetrate,
i stare,
i glare,
i convince,
i deceive,
i surprise,
i mesmerise,
i storm,
i calm,
i do,
i sue,
i rule,
i cool,
i sin, but
i win....

but in the end i failed to portray
her deepest sorrow laid inside her,

i cant conclude, whether,
she has beautiful eyes,
or i have a beautiful owner........."

but by the way, her eyes
even failed to portray that,
it can even make me to write a poem about it...

simply concludin,
" i've fainted.........."

4 comments:

  1. scene ra :-):-) apdiyey andha powerful eyes which made u fainta yaarodadhunnu nxt poem la, illa illa PROSE la sollidra chlm ;-):-)

    really gr8 da :-) keep goin :-):-)

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  2. night mirrora parthutu faint aanathuku ippadi oru build up ah?

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  3. hey what a feel!!
    sema cool!!
    i never knew u r gud at all these..
    hmmm by the way who's the one who inspired u sooooooo much???
    well, 'll know it soon..
    keep rocking wit all ur poems!!

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  4. naduvula naduvula mane, thene, ponmane la pottukko..

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